Model Rocketry and free speech, what could be better?
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Grammer man, Grammerbernomatic wrote:No, no, no... It better not be one of those alternative realities thingies. That Is, unless Lt. Ono in "that outfit" some how found herself in the commander's quarters on some Starport...
Well, I better not continue least mother of all rockets finds an empty airlock that she wants me to visit.
and a certain popular lieutenant 
might have been seen there. 
.... where did I leave my Dress Whites???? 
I think you mean "grammar"... "Grammer" makes air-ride seats for tractors, semi-trucks, and buses...Commander wrote:Grammer man, Grammerbernomatic wrote:No, no, no... It better not be one of those alternative realities thingies. That Is, unless Lt. Ono in "that outfit" some how found herself in the commander's quarters on some Starport...
Well, I better not continue least mother of all rockets finds an empty airlock that she wants me to visit.
Along this vein, I was recently listening to a Youtube video, they were discussing the Murrow boys, radio newscasters from back in the day . The story goes that one reporter was told, don't tell us the streets ran with blood, say the police officer that would wave to me every day I walked down the street, wasn't there today.Rocket Babe wrote:That's great! He'll be glad to hear you say you prefer enough detail but not too much, as we have had that discussion early on in his writing. Randy says too many authors tend to write as though their readers have no imagination at all and use too many adjectives/details to the point of being tedious. Many times the story becomes lost in the process.
And he knows that we all have our own way of seeing things or people and by giving the reader a general description but not an exact inch by inch rendition, allows the reader to connect better with the character, by seeing them in their own mind, their way. The reader creates exactly the appearance that is pleasing or acceptable to them in their own mind.
After I thought about it, it made a lot of sense.
it sounds very interesting. WOW! At some point soon I'll start a new thread for the new book.
I may have to post a disclaimer to go with it and BTW, how's your heart? 